Three On A Match
-- : Third on a match. Meaning: bad luck.

James Craft Half-Blood


#1
James Craft Offline
Phoenix Half-Blood
Touched
Path:
Half-Blood(Phoenix)
Rank:
Dabbler
Reputation:
1 Fame
Mundane Skill(s):
N/A
Magic Keywords:
Fire, Healing, Flight
Magic Abilities:
Boon Fire Proof: His entire body is fire proof.

Cantrip Heating: Before he actually causes fires James he just heat up his hands and things around him to the point of boiling
#2
Indy Offline
Eldritch
Hey there! It looks like you're just missing James' boon or his cantrip, as you only list one minor ability. The "Heating" minor ability could work as either, and you mention an imperviousness to fire in his Keyword powers that can easily be a Boon. Please take a closer look to decide what you want for him and mark the Cantrip and the Boon.

Remember also to include them in the review form. It looks like you accidentally missed it:
Code:
[b]Magic Abilities:[/b] (Briefly name the characters Charms, Cantrips, Boon, or Aspect, depending on which Path the character belongs to)
#3
Indy Offline
Eldritch

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