Nick- Hanna is looking great. Her history has a good delivery and her power set is solid. There are just two things we’re looking for:
- more details on the elixir and how it ties in with grounding. We can see the essentials are there but we’d like to know more, see the tangible parts of her grounding. What kind of components does she need to collect? Blood? Electricity? Some other resource? What’s the procedure for the elixir? Things like that but otherwise, it looks good.
- we can logically follow the line between telekinesis and minor telekinesis but could you add the description to the magic section?
Otherwise, looking good. We’re looking forward to seeing her in play!
- more details on the elixir and how it ties in with grounding. We can see the essentials are there but we’d like to know more, see the tangible parts of her grounding. What kind of components does she need to collect? Blood? Electricity? Some other resource? What’s the procedure for the elixir? Things like that but otherwise, it looks good.
- we can logically follow the line between telekinesis and minor telekinesis but could you add the description to the magic section?
Otherwise, looking good. We’re looking forward to seeing her in play!